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is this song good? No ending time set. |
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yeah i love it! |
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NO |
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Green Smith
Joined: 01 May 2007 Posts: 131 Location: United States
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:05 pm |
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Dev Lebowski wrote: |
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Your welcome |
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Dev Lebowski
Joined: 18 Aug 2008 Posts: 328 Location: in the land of ice wind fire and earth. exactly what i thought but thats what this sign says.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 8:47 pm |
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people call me a missfit
people call me a dip___
while i think i have potential
everyone hardly gets suspensful
wait until the day
when you start to pay
pay me that is
until i see this
i will have my vengeance
for i am horrendous
you hear from me
just wait and see
this day is getting dark
as i go down to the park
i see a man staring
he just seems to be glaring
with his eyes red
he came up and said
"would you like power?"
others would have seen cower
but i stood like a tower
staring back i said
"i want my deserved power"
he then lifted his hand
and got some sand
he then threw it at me
thats how i came to be
i see others scared
my glance of dare
then i go down the alley
like i own a valley
for see my powers strong
and now i am no more wrong
wait until my eyes lay upon you
for you will see the blind ghoul is cruel
for as long as i hear
i will come to your fear
there you are green... maybe the blind ghoul will find to you to?
http://a.bebo.com/app-image/6645987129/6645855479/PROFILE/i.idlestudios.com/img/q/u/08/05/08/Ghoul.jpg _________________
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Green Smith
Joined: 01 May 2007 Posts: 131 Location: United States
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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 11:49 pm |
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Nice poems guys |
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Jonathon Smith
Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 653 Location: Dundee,Scotland
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 4:07 pm |
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*jonathon doesnt believe that people can do poems like that.but he still likes them*
my auidence.liked the poems guys. _________________ "Forgive your enemies, but never forget their names" ~J.F.K |
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Dev Lebowski
Joined: 18 Aug 2008 Posts: 328 Location: in the land of ice wind fire and earth. exactly what i thought but thats what this sign says.
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Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 8:28 pm |
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lol i loves the thought
lol it seems to be alot
as i look past
i find you there
near the last
sittin there like you dont care
as i walk up your eyes glisten
its like a blossom
as i walk so near
all is gone, even my fear
nothing wrong
as i sing this song
singing aloud
almost abound
then you smile with that face
you get up and move the same pace
getting closer our face brightens
our looks get to a point of tightness
then you come up with your lovely looks
carrying nothing but a few books
as i come closer it all seems quick
almost like she picked
she moved like me
closer to be
then i look she closed her eyes
and so did i
then it happened
happened so fast _________________
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Jonathon Smith
Joined: 30 Sep 2007 Posts: 653 Location: Dundee,Scotland
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 7:07 pm |
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then again my auidences eye are hurting for seeing all these poems.
good poem though. _________________ "Forgive your enemies, but never forget their names" ~J.F.K |
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Drpepper Simpson
Joined: 09 Nov 2007 Posts: 1333 Location: America
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 7:19 pm |
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My auidence to all the Poams:
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Dev Lebowski
Joined: 18 Aug 2008 Posts: 328 Location: in the land of ice wind fire and earth. exactly what i thought but thats what this sign says.
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:13 am |
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Then in the last look
my hopes and dreams were crushed
not by the ones who hated my wishes
but the ones that seemed to care
i thought i was going to be great
but no one cared for me anymore
i became lost in the wind
it didnt seem to make me happy
just a bit tacky
they started chasing me now
because of what everyone fears
to see us on the streets was the greatest threat
no one really cared
we were all targets
people stared
she never understood why
but i knew why that was
no one wanted to deal with the others
as i look with my final gasp of air
i see her lying there motionless
friends staring coldly
enemies glaring with enragement
until it came again
the final blow
i saw her no more
this was an inspiration from a episodic series on newgrounds(wished i remembered the name of it).
where a cat and a bunny fell in love
whil every other person hated them for it
just brings a tear to my eyes. "sniff" _________________
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Green Smith
Joined: 01 May 2007 Posts: 131 Location: United States
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:24 pm |
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Nice poems guys, there starting to blind my eyes, but besides that, I love em. xD.
(Then again I dont get how poems can blind my eyes) |
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Donny Lebowski
Official Comic Maker
Joined: 01 Apr 2008 Posts: 2176 Location: UK, England.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:27 pm |
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Green is erm...green,
So here's to you! _________________
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Noname Totoro
Joined: 25 Apr 2008 Posts: 397 Location: Earth, it's a planet in Milky way
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:30 pm |
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Well Donny sukz.
Atleast said by Take.
But his 50 will probably rock.
And if it does I'll buy him a milkshake _________________ "I admit my Fronch cod be butter." - Officer Crabtree, 'Allo 'Allo. |
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Donny Lebowski
Official Comic Maker
Joined: 01 Apr 2008 Posts: 2176 Location: UK, England.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:54 pm |
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Haha, don't expect a godly comic.
Expect a more nostalgic type thing.
Anyway, not the place to talk. _________________
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Dev Lebowski
Joined: 18 Aug 2008 Posts: 328 Location: in the land of ice wind fire and earth. exactly what i thought but thats what this sign says.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 8:05 pm |
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i lived along time ago
in an attic
on my mattress
watching an a soon to be actress
she was lovely in beuty
she loved to be called a cutie
i longed for her gaze to go upon me
then at last i saw her look up
she stared with a look
and looked real qiet
then i quickly made sure to hide
as she looked up in a confused glare
i knew i just could not dare
it wasnt the right time
as i looked at a sign
it said we were all losing time
lol i make this a poem game.
look at all my poems and match them in the order you think is right(yes its episodic) except for the one before this. _________________
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Green Smith
Joined: 01 May 2007 Posts: 131 Location: United States
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Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 6:19 pm |
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xD, nice Dev. Reeeal nice. : ) |
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Johnathan Svoltaire
Warbears' Logo Creator
Joined: 27 Oct 2007 Posts: 2053 Location: United States
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 7:02 am |
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Green, do you have any songs to share with us? _________________
"Integration error. Microsoft's screw up is now in every application." |
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