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Themepark Simpson
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
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Location: Denmark
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| Marshall Brancacane wrote: |
Here's some other things;
In the title you wrote 'Issue 1: Business matters' - being a title, the 'm' in 'matters' should be capitalised.
You put three question marks instead of just one, like a normal person.
Thirdly, quoting your sentence 'My meeting is starting soon, but' - Here the comma isn't needed because you're connecting two independent clauses. That is why you use words such as 'but', 'and', 'therefore'.
THE COMIC IS ALL WRONG. THE FULLSTOPS, SIMON! |
You must be fun at parties. |
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Marshall Brancacane
Joined: 22 Jul 2010
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Location: England
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 9:08 am |
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| You must be fun at parties. |
I don't go to parties.
The parties come to me. |
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Simon Griffin
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 9:19 am |
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| Marshall Brancacane wrote: |
Here's some other things;
In the title you wrote 'Issue 1: Business matters' - being a title, the 'm' in 'matters' should be capitalised.
You put three question marks instead of just one, like a normal person.
Thirdly, quoting your sentence 'My meeting is starting soon, but' - Here the comma isn't needed because you're connecting two independent clauses. That is why you use words such as 'but', 'and', 'therefore'.
THE COMIC IS ALL WRONG. THE FULLSTOPS, SIMON! |
clap, clap, clap
You're right about all these mistakes but you're missing the error I am talking about here.
1 point for catching my grammatical/semantic errors! 
PS: Oh and in regards to my grammar/semantic structure, I appreciate your concern and the desire for perfect and accurate content but stop being a language parser. My compiler is already quite whiny y'know!
[Please edit previous post if you're going to double post that close together.] |
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Marshall Brancacane
Joined: 22 Jul 2010
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Location: England
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 10:09 am |
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| Simon Griffin wrote: |
| PS: Oh and in regards to my grammar/semantic structure, I appreciate your concern and the desire for perfect and accurate content but stop being a language parser. My compiler is already quite whiny y'know! |
You're rude! |
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Simon Griffin
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
Posts: 13
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 12:59 pm |
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| Marshall Brancacane wrote: |
| Simon Griffin wrote: |
| PS: Oh and in regards to my grammar/semantic structure, I appreciate your concern and the desire for perfect and accurate content but stop being a language parser. My compiler is already quite whiny y'know! |
You're rude! |
Says the person who was using caps in a response. |
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Themepark Simpson
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
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Location: Denmark
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 2:04 pm |
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| Simon Griffin wrote: |
| Marshall Brancacane wrote: |
| Simon Griffin wrote: |
| PS: Oh and in regards to my grammar/semantic structure, I appreciate your concern and the desire for perfect and accurate content but stop being a language parser. My compiler is already quite whiny y'know! |
You're rude! |
Says the person who was using caps in a response. |
He was just using constants.  |
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Marshall Brancacane
Joined: 22 Jul 2010
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Location: England
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| Posted: Sun May 21, 2017 4:10 pm |
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| Themepark Simpson wrote: |
| Simon Griffin wrote: |
| Marshall Brancacane wrote: |
| Simon Griffin wrote: |
| PS: Oh and in regards to my grammar/semantic structure, I appreciate your concern and the desire for perfect and accurate content but stop being a language parser. My compiler is already quite whiny y'know! |
You're rude! |
Says the person who was using caps in a response. |
He was just using constants. |
I'm innocent. |
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Stingooo Totoro
Joined: 20 Aug 2009
Posts: 133
Location: ummm BTC
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| Posted: Sun May 28, 2017 8:19 pm |
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It's that time of week again where I release another comic for you all to enjoy, hate, compliment, criticize, love, despise, etc! It's your raging alcoholic beer lord, Professor When!
http://imgur.com/a/zlzDp
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Marshall Brancacane
Joined: 22 Jul 2010
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Location: England
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| Posted: Sun May 28, 2017 9:30 pm |
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| Nice comic, Sting! |
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Sewage Anderson
Joined: 03 Jan 2010
Posts: 55
Location: England
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| Posted: Tue May 30, 2017 4:57 pm |
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| Made me smile to see more of this. Nice job Sting! |
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Stingooo Totoro
Joined: 20 Aug 2009
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| Posted: Tue May 30, 2017 10:35 pm |
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He lives!  |
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Simon Griffin
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
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| Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2017 6:01 pm |
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Hey all! Edition 2 of The Soyuz Of The Fridges is now up! Enjoy!
Link: http://imgur.com/a/0zlMV (Mods, please fix link and remove this message)
[Whatcha gonna do if I don't!?] |
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Sewage Anderson
Joined: 03 Jan 2010
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Location: England
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| Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2017 6:05 pm |
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| Simon Griffin wrote: |
Hey all! Edition 2 of The Soyuz Of The Fridges is now up! Enjoy!
Link: imgur . com /a/0zlMV (Mods, please fix link and remove this message) |
I'm going to quote this so everyone can see your shame!
Great comic btw, thanks for letting me star again! |
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Simon Griffin
Joined: 01 Jan 2014
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| Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2017 6:29 pm |
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| Sewage Anderson wrote: |
| Simon Griffin wrote: |
Hey all! Edition 2 of The Soyuz Of The Fridges is now up! Enjoy!
Link: <Refer above> |
I'm going to quote this so everyone can see your shame!
Great comic btw, thanks for letting me star again! |
No problem.
Oh and darn you for that. >.> |
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Tango Totoro
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Joined: 02 Jul 2008
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| Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2017 7:14 pm |
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great comic! 
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