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Who's story do you think is the best written?
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Bishop's
20%
 20%  [ 7 ]
Bjorn's
34%
 34%  [ 12 ]
Captin's
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
Jefff's
2%
 2%  [ 1 ]
Johnathan's
17%
 17%  [ 6 ]
Poison's
8%
 8%  [ 3 ]
Tango's
11%
 11%  [ 4 ]
Drpepper's
2%
 2%  [ 1 ]
Chaniii's
2%
 2%  [ 1 ]
Total Votes : 35

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Poison Simpson



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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 7:27 pm Reply with quote

Chaniii Mazinga wrote:
I entered mine in who do I pm it to?


Sheena.

Also,

Bishop Panzerotten wrote:
Well, believe it or not, I basically just made mine up as I went along, and I'm pretty proud of it. Razz


I did the same thing.
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Chaniii Mazinga



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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 7:27 pm Reply with quote

Yus got the right person!
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Drpepper Simpson



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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 2:13 am Reply with quote

Phew! Uhoh

Just sent mine, hope i made it in time, it's 9:13 PM May 19th for me so....

I'm very proud of mine! and I actually surprised my self with it Soo happy
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Chaniii Mazinga



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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:03 am Reply with quote

My name isn't on the voting thing... Sad
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:07 am Reply with quote

Woah, I wouldn't really call this a SHORT story competition, I mean c'mon look at Tango's, and DP's!
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Sheena Totoro



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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:10 am Reply with quote

Chaniii Mazinga wrote:
My name isn't on the voting thing... Sad

Sorry, I'm getting a mod to do that now.
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:15 am Reply with quote

Why can't you edit it?
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:17 am Reply with quote

Actionboy Smith wrote:
Why can't you edit it?


'cause once a poll's added, it's not available on the first post anymore.
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:22 am Reply with quote

Ahh...
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Oscar House



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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 2:58 pm Reply with quote

DP, I think it was a large mistake to write it with that unclear font. Despite that, I read your story, to give equal chances to everyone.
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Tango Totoro
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 8:06 pm Reply with quote

Yeah.. I hate reading cursive.
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 8:50 pm Reply with quote

For me, it was a choice between John, Tango and Dp.

The rest were crap.

(Excluding mine, of course. I'm not shallow enough to vote for my own story.)
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Pancake Smith



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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 9:23 pm Reply with quote

John's was a bit cheesy for my tastes, but still decently written.

I agree that the only decent ones were yours, John's, Tango's and Drpepper's, the rest were horrible.

Bishop's was entirely dialog, there was no real writing involved.
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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2009 10:25 pm Reply with quote

Oh, Sorry 'bout the Font, i thought it'd give it that extra feel of a Diary Uhoh
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Poison Simpson



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PostPosted: Thu May 21, 2009 6:21 am Reply with quote

Aww, so mine was crap? Sad

Well, I'm only a kid, I hardly write stories, and I made it all up as I went along.

It's bound to be crap, to you critics. Mmmh..
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