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Frank #82 - Noob Nation Part 3
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Like it?
No ending time set.
ZOMZORZ YUS ITS OUT!!! (Yeah!)
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 68%  [ 53 ]
Meh (Meh)
12%
 12%  [ 10 ]
*Sigh* This again? (No)
18%
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Trick Brancacane



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 3:11 pm Reply with quote

Well the story have some problems. You (Frank) were hacked by noobs and in this part you act like a new guy here. But editing and stuff is good. So i give 7/10.

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Frankengoober Simpson
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 3:12 pm Reply with quote

Trick Brancacane wrote:
Well the story have some problems. You (Frank) were hacked by noobs and in this part you act like a new guy here. But editing and stuff is good. So i give 7/10.

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It's the same character, he read the rules, and then had one of those extremely rare moments whena noob realises it would be better to follow them. Razz
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Trick Brancacane



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 3:13 pm Reply with quote

Frankengoober Simpson wrote:
Trick Brancacane wrote:
Well the story have some problems. You (Frank) were hacked by noobs and in this part you act like a new guy here. But editing and stuff is good. So i give 7/10.

Rated by Trick Brancacane


It's the same character, he read the rules, and then had one of those extremely rare moments whena noob realises it would be better to follow them. Razz


Oh... now i get.
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Mcrfreak Simpson
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 3:15 pm Reply with quote

LOL. I love it. It was worth waiting for, definitely.
I knew it was coming, from MSN so I got up this morning and was too lazy to turn the computer on, so I pushed my brother off the wii and went on the internet channel. Grin grin

Anyway,

Editing - 10/10. Flawless. I love the bit where you are in the rules. The editing on Ginger was so good I didn't even notice and the firewall was grea.

Humour - 8/10. I don't agree that you kept the ginger joke on a bit too long, and you didn't. I think the longer it goes on, the better. I loved the ginger joke and I think you did well. Also, the 'Just call me Bob.' mademe lol.

Layout - 9/10. I LOVE the new layout.

Overall - A well deserved 9/10.


That's my first big review. Well done. Soo happy
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Drogn Risotto



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:08 pm Reply with quote

I didn't like it that much frank. I did like the "Ginger name joke", though. I could tell you pasted ginger before I saw that message after the bottom. A few dots here and there. Remember to fix those, but other than that, 7/10. I'm looking forward to the final part(s). Oh yeah, and the fire wall was excellent.
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Paperbowser Totoro



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:23 pm Reply with quote

Comedy-3.0, It wasn't really that funny, but it was good for a chuckle. I don't know why, but the eyebrows on Ginger made me laugh.

Editing-4.0, It was okay, I was surprised to find Ginger was Pasted on. But, the Bubble arrow pointing at Frank looked a little, funky.

The New layout-1.0, I don't really like this new one, the old one looked better, mostly because it had a whole bunch of your characters.

Overall-8/10, The comic was good overall. It feels like this comic is tying the series together, as two brave heroes take stand! Wink
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Homsar Burritos



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 8:30 pm Reply with quote

Frankengoober Simpson wrote:
Trick Brancacane wrote:
Well the story have some problems. You (Frank) were hacked by noobs and in this part you act like a new guy here. But editing and stuff is good. So i give 7/10.

Rated by Trick Brancacane


It's the same character, he read the rules, and then had one of those extremely rare moments whena noob realises it would be better to follow them. Razz


Oh, that would be me then, right? Reading the rules was one of the first things I did. Anywho, great comic, Frank. The editing on Ginger was good except on the two first frames. The funniness was okay, and the new title thingy looks awesome. I can't wait for the anti-climax!

I guess this is a new start for Frank. Wonder who wins, 73h N()()!35* or Frank & his "team."

*My attempt to spelled "The Noobs" in 1337 Speak.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:20 am Reply with quote

Frankengoober Simpson wrote:
Trick Brancacane wrote:
Well the story have some problems. You (Frank) were hacked by noobs and in this part you act like a new guy here. But editing and stuff is good. So i give 7/10.

Rated by Trick Brancacane


It's the same character, he read the rules, and then had one of those extremely rare moments whena noob realises it would be better to follow them. Razz


I had one of the those moments.......
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Agentpwner Lebowski



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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:59 am Reply with quote

Hey, Frank, what type of font is that?


Also, because this was more of a crucial part of the storyline, I won't rate it, because the punchline is not delivered.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:20 am Reply with quote

Agentpwner Lebowski wrote:
Hey, Frank, what type of font is that?


Also, because this was more of a crucial part of the storyline, I won't rate it, because the punchline is not delivered.


There won't be an actual punchline, but hopefully the next parts will be funnier.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:44 am Reply with quote

Frankengoober Simpson wrote:
Agentpwner Lebowski wrote:
Hey, Frank, what type of font is that?


Also, because this was more of a crucial part of the storyline, I won't rate it, because the punchline is not delivered.


There won't be an actual punchline, but hopefully the next parts will be funnier.


And the font?
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:15 am Reply with quote

Agentpwner Lebowski wrote:
Frankengoober Simpson wrote:
Agentpwner Lebowski wrote:
Hey, Frank, what type of font is that?


Also, because this was more of a crucial part of the storyline, I won't rate it, because the punchline is not delivered.


There won't be an actual punchline, but hopefully the next parts will be funnier.


And the font?


Gilligans Island.

XD
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:26 am Reply with quote

That's strange...


I just got it.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 12:26 pm Reply with quote

I'll rate it 10/10. I can see the edited part.
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:35 pm Reply with quote

+ Nice editing
+ Nice new layout

- It's mean to noobs
- The Ginger joke was poor
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