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Scott Giffuri
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Posts: 75
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 2:52 pm |
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*does a few quick calculations*
So Steve was born in 1980?
...Really interesting script, anyways. It's definitely both longer and funnier. Heck, it has at least three gags, while mine from the previous page only had one. _________________ And I'm one post closer to being permitted to post URLs. Man, this is slow. |
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Tacobadger Burritos
TV Channel Maker
Joined: 02 Nov 2007 Posts: 1739 Location: Your closet
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:36 am |
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Cams Anderson wrote: |
Made it longer and funnier
Intercom: commander!!!
Commander: what is it?
I: a contact from the police
C: On screen
(we could hear loud noise and the screen is shaking)
Police: WARBEARS!!!!!!
C: what's going on now?
P:Oh nothing, we're training for earthquakes. HEY, STOP THE MACHINE!!!
(things get quiet)
C:But it's been proved that our city is safe from earthquakes for a 1000 years.
P:That's what we're training for.
C: ...
P: Anyway, we have a little problem. I sent police to save the hostages hours ago.
C: really? but I heard that they're still not rescued now
P: That's the problem. They were playing "warbirds" on their computer. But they got lost in the ocean and accidently went to the bermuda triangle, then they dissapeared!!!!!!
C: OK, we'll have a look. Contact the agents!
In the middle of the ocean
S: Sigh.... back at the ocean.
R: Lucky i didn't use the polarbearfloatingball this time. This place is too far away from the city.
K: Hey guys, somethings happening!!!!
A green light appears around them and the warbears dissapear. And reappear in an unknown area.
R: ARGH!!!!! Their laser sword sliced through my katanas!!!! HELP!!!!!
S: What are you talking about? Nobody is here except us.
R: Huh? (checks a paper) Oh, i got confused with my lines. I was supposed to say, Where are we?
L: These machines around us looks very advanced.
K: OH MY GOD!!!! My DS says that we're in the year 2468!!!!!!
S: What?!? Are you serious??? I'm 488 years old this moment?
Lucas punches Steve
S: OW! I was joking.
Then the fish like creatures from mission 3 approaches them.
Fish: HA HA HA!!!!!! you bears fell into our trap.
R: You're unarmed now. Let's fight.
The fish get's out a laser sword and slices through Ryho's katanas.
R: ARGH!!!!! Their laser sword sliced through my katanas!!!! HELP!!!!!
Fish: There is no help here. Take their weapons and put them in jail!!!
The warbears are sent to a prison with lasers blocking the door and the mission begins. |
how about the "bear"muta triangle |
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Shawn Anderson
Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 231 Location: new york,the most famous city in the US!
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:17 am |
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Cams Anderson wrote: |
Fish: There is no help here. Take their weapons and put them in jail!!!
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three problems with that part of the story:
1) (at least in the US) a person can not be put in jail without going to court first.
2) as they would most likely be in international waters,where there is no official government,they therefore could not be brought to trial. (even if they could,they would most likely have a liscence for there weapons)
3) even if they somehow got put in jail,in mission 3 it said that the government sent them. if they were of any value at all to the government then they could not be jailed that easily.
(anyone looking?) ok,*AHEM* my dad has a goverment job,so i guess i picked it up from him. please stop staring. _________________ hey! look! it's the oldest trick in the book! *reaches for your wallet
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your drawing rules. |
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Blade Burritos
Joined: 21 Jul 2007 Posts: 289
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 5:03 am |
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Maybe it meant a prison? Like an underwater one. |
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Cams Anderson
Joined: 07 Jul 2007 Posts: 34 Location: south korea
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 7:37 am |
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isn't "jail" and "prison" a same thing? |
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Scott Giffuri
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Posts: 75
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Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 8:48 am |
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I'm sure Cammie didn't mean an actual jail. Probably some sort of private cell for prisoners. Evil conspirators tend to have those for troublesome interferers. _________________ And I'm one post closer to being permitted to post URLs. Man, this is slow. |
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Wilsonway Burritos
Joined: 01 Dec 2007 Posts: 245 Location: US
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Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:46 am |
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Ok,I like Cams and Scott's idea... It would be cool if someone actually went through with them.*hint hint*
And...maybe what Cam meant as a "jail" was like a box cage thing with bars around it like M3. _________________ *cough* |
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Scott Giffuri
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Posts: 75
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:43 pm |
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I'm planning out the end sequence for mine... I'm thinking a chase scene. Sir Kla and Sir Ryoh are chasing the thieves on a horse-driven chariot, with Ryoh driving while Kla charges up his mana. The thieves are on horseback, too. The head thief is at the far right edge of the screen, with Kla and Ryoh on the far left.
Every now and then, one horseback thief will fall back and begin shooting arrows. It's Ryoh's job to block these by holding his shield at three different heights (click the on-screen buttons to change the height). If Ryoh doesn't block the arrow, it'll strike the chariot and cause Kla to lose his concentration, making him have to charge up all over again.
On the other hand, if Ryoh defends Kla for long enough that Kla can finish charging up, he can cast a spell to hypnotize the thief's horse. You'll then see a meter go up and down, like when Lucas is preparing to throw a CPG in Mission 3. When you stop the meter by clicking a button, the horse will stop and toss the thief high into the air; where he lands depends on where you stop the meter.
Your task is to get it just right so that the thief lands on top of the head thief. Get him enough times, and he'll fall off his horse while his underlings scatter, and you win. And don't worry if you miss; there's a seemingly endless number of thieves.
...Can you picture all that? _________________ And I'm one post closer to being permitted to post URLs. Man, this is slow. |
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Blade Burritos
Joined: 21 Jul 2007 Posts: 289
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:11 pm |
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...Yes.
But what about Sir Lucas? |
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Scott Giffuri
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Posts: 75
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:15 pm |
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Who says all the Warbears have to participate in every part of the mission? _________________ And I'm one post closer to being permitted to post URLs. Man, this is slow. |
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Blade Burritos
Joined: 21 Jul 2007 Posts: 289
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:24 pm |
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Well then what is he doing? Reading Don Quixote? |
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Scott Giffuri
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Posts: 75
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:32 pm |
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Well, what were Kla and Ryoh doing during the finale of Mission 1? _________________ And I'm one post closer to being permitted to post URLs. Man, this is slow. |
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Stuart Lebowski
Bug Hunters Team Member
Joined: 25 Jan 2007 Posts: 266 Location: Lancaster
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:43 am |
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Playing Pong on the security monitor. _________________ Rorschach avatar by Benjamin Lebowski.
Not a moderator. I don't know why people keep getting this idea. |
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Mochaa House
Joined: 03 Dec 2007 Posts: 7 Location: The milky way galaxy
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Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 12:46 pm |
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Sword Smith wrote: |
I think it would be a good idea to have an episode which includes flashbacks in Brown & White or have an entire episode as a flashback. |
that would be slightly irritating AND awsome at the same time _________________ Ouch..I have a serious case of red-eye... |
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Myneighbor Totoro
Joined: 20 Jan 2007 Posts: 72 Location: At the computer.
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 5:31 pm |
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Castle idea's awesome.
What about a fox character? Hehehe. _________________ "And the man in the back said 'Everyone attack', and it turned into a Ballroom Blitz."
-Ballroom Blitz by The Sweet |
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