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Frankengoober Simpson
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Hello everyone, join me today as we take a look at a very violent little tale about a man, and his one true love. 
Page 1
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Page 3
Or: http://i56.tinypic.com/24e1fux.png
And: http://i56.tinypic.com/3322b7l.png
Also: http://i56.tinypic.com/2e0ti4o.png
Editing Notes:
This one took a good 6 hours.
Was a little boring in some areas, but it was usually different stuff, so it all worked out alright. The most annoying parts were the blood. In a lot of parts it ooks pretty bad, but after trying over an over and over to get them to look better, I'm fairly confident I got them to look as good as I personally can. Although it seems with me that some days I editbetter than others, so maybe it's just one of those off days. 
Enjoy!
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Ninja Panzerotten
Joined: 21 Jan 2008
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:58 am |
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| Hahaha what. D: |
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Mochi Totoro
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 7:26 am |
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A bit graphic, but not a bad comic at all. However, I think your rival should have been angry about something else, as it didn't seem to follow that he'd be mad because you stole his love. Maybe something related to comic-making would be funnier...
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Globox Simpson
Joined: 19 Apr 2007
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Location: The land of Köttbullar and Smörgåsbord, and epic guys with beards and hats
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:21 am |
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| Damn good. Feels good someone made a little more graphic comic. |
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Bjorn Harlan
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 9:46 am |
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Fight scenes in comics are brilliant! Most people give up and stick a panel with 'This scene is too violent' blah blah which I hate but putting in so much effort to make a quality looking fight scene demands a lot of respect!
(I remember Joseph Carpenter did an amazing fight scene in his Tree Prophet series...)
Excellent comic Frank! |
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Tango Totoro
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 12:09 pm |
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Hahaha, the violent scenes are impressive and funny at the same time! I loved the comic Frank. Just a little editing problem: In the first page last panel you probably wanted the person to say "too" instead of "to".
But seriously this was an awesome comic; keep them coming please!
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Zick Burritos
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 12:27 pm |
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love em all especially the fighting and all blood
awesome dude
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Nickyh Smith
Joined: 12 Dec 2007
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 1:12 pm |
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A neat plot isn't always what we want >:D
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Rojoco Anderson
Joined: 15 Feb 2008
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:32 pm |
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Wow! Two decapitations in one comic! 
My relentless death scenes never fail to amuse me. xD
Also, I could be a right old jerk here and point out a small continuity error involving a certain re-appearing dart board...
I could ... but I wouldn't do that. |
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Frankengoober Simpson
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:59 pm |
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| Rojoco Anderson wrote: |
| Also, I could be a right old jerk here and point out a small continuity error involving a certain re-appearing dart board... |
Oh crap. xD
Ah well, I also gotta fix the typo Tango mentioned, and another problem I noticed no one's menioned yet. 
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Yummytummy Burritos
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:20 pm |
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Hehe love the fighting xD
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Lolbear Simpson
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:45 pm |
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| Urrrmm, what did Frank do to him at the last fight panel? Did he punch his head off? |
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Roxie Bauer
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:55 pm |
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| I love the dartboard' spinning effect. Heck, even the dart is at different places at different times! 18/20! |
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Tango Totoro
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| Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:13 pm |
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Lol, dartboard respawn.
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Frankengoober Simpson
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| Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:38 am |
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Hey, thanks for whoever validated the comic, but I just fixed the problems that were in it, so if it could pelase be re-validated, I'd appreciate it. 
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