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Blade Burritos
Joined: 21 Jul 2007
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Sheena, it looks great, all except for the jean shorts, which are kind of hard to identify as jean shorts. I understand that it's hard to make short pants look much different than regular pants on a bear template, so the length is fine. Maybe more detail on the pants is all, a few lines doesn't seem to look right. I think the pants should be a solid color with extra details to make it more like denim. That's all I'd like to change.
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Why can I write a whole paragraph about some pants on a bear when I can hardly get that far in a school paper? |
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Takeoshi Totoro
Warbears Mockup Master
Joined: 19 Jan 2008
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| Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 6:15 pm |
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| Poison Simpson wrote: |
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| @Jpyo I still need to colour, get rid of pencil marks and get a good scanned image, but would this do? (only top half of bear and the megaphone at mouth) |
Wait, did he even ask for hand-drawn? |
He asked for a pres bear, I didn't see any preferences for either.
@Sheena, if I'm honest I have more trust in JP actually staying long enough to use my avatar than Royal, no offense Royal. I generally make orders for people who have been here longer on a higher priority. Plus JP's order interested me more.
| Sheena Totoro wrote: |
Blade, order's up! Unfortunetly, I couldn't put the shoes on, and the peace out sign would have been impossible. I hope you like it, and tell me asap if there are any adjustments I can make  |
Can I give some tips for it?
I would suggest using more bold outlines for everything, maybe using darker colours, in my opinion it looks better that way. Also with the cap try to curve the front over more rather than just put it to one side.
It's not bad though. |
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Royal Calothycos
Joined: 03 Jul 2010
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| Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:21 pm |
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No offence to Taek but I have no plan to leave at the moment  |
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Jonpatrick Smith
Joined: 18 Aug 2007
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Location: Paradise
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| Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 6:03 pm |
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| Takeoshi Totoro wrote: |
| @Jpyo I still need to colour, get rid of pencil marks and get a good scanned image, but would this do? (only top half of bear and the megaphone at mouth) |
Yeah that sounds okay to me Take.
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Trick Brancacane
Joined: 15 Nov 2008
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:56 pm |
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Is there any free order that I can make?
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Sheena Totoro
Joined: 28 Apr 2007
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Location: Slit-your-wrists land
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:29 pm |
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Taek, I''m trying to stamp down the whole higher priority for older members thing, because its totally discouraging for new people. Since you've already started JP's, you can continue with that
Trick, could you do Royal's?
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Trick Brancacane
Joined: 15 Nov 2008
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:43 pm |
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| Sheena Totoro wrote: |
| Trick, could you do Royal's? |
Yeah sure
EDIT : DONE. Royal, If you won't be happy, I can make a new one then  |
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Sheena Totoro
Joined: 28 Apr 2007
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Location: Slit-your-wrists land
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:15 pm |
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Pretty cool, Trickster. Could you try making the hat a bit smaller, though? It looks way too big.
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Trick Brancacane
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:27 pm |
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| Sheena Totoro wrote: |
| Pretty cool, Trickster. Could you try making the hat a bit smaller, though? It looks way too big. |
I will try my best...
EDIT : I tried my best |
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Pepper Brancacane
Joined: 27 Nov 2007
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Location: back seat
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Takeoshi Totoro
Warbears Mockup Master
Joined: 19 Jan 2008
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 3:57 pm |
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| Sheena Totoro wrote: |
| Taek, I''m trying to stamp down the whole higher priority for older members thing, because its totally discouraging for new people. |
How?
I have made many bears which haven't been used at all for new members, because they leave straightaway. So, from experience, I generally make bears for older more likely to stay members.
I'm working on JP's but due to lack of graphics program atm I'm having to use paint.
@Pepper in general the bear that you want should be based on something fairly humanoid in shape, what you have there will probably come out rubbish as a bear. |
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Pepper Brancacane
Joined: 27 Nov 2007
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| Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:22 pm |
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Forget about my order then if you haven't started it
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Sheena Totoro
Joined: 28 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 6:39 am |
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Yeah Pepper, that's pretty impossible do to, sorry!
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Pepper Brancacane
Joined: 27 Nov 2007
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| Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 7:18 am |
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No problem lol
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Globox Simpson
Joined: 19 Apr 2007
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Location: The land of Köttbullar and Smörgåsbord, and epic guys with beards and hats
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| Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:06 am |
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I want a bear:
Name: Boss Bear
Facial expression: Normal.
Clothes: A blue suit with a black tie.
Accessories: A briefcase.
Presentational
Avatar
Extras: A text saying "Globox Simpson" at the bottom.
Animations: (Optional, but I'd like it this way), His cellphone rings, he answers it and says "Like a boss". |
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