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No ending time set. |
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Stim Smith
Joined: 14 Feb 2007
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Location: The Highest Tower of The Lowest Pit...Eastern Europe
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Amusing 7/10
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Josh Panzerotten
Joined: 23 May 2007
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| Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 6:28 am |
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I liked it.....8/10
Good job, seņor fizzle.
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Takeoshi Totoro
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Joined: 19 Jan 2008
Posts: 2172
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| Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 7:41 pm |
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Lol, I actually thought it was funny, I was surprised at all the bad reviews =P.
You could have editted the window to be open or something though. |
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Josh Panzerotten
Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 94
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| Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:37 pm |
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Yeah, or a broken window.
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Jonathon Smith
Joined: 30 Sep 2007
Posts: 653
Location: Dundee,Scotland
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| Posted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 5:49 am |
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sorta jumped,from stuff to stuff not that funny but it was ok I guess.
5/10
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Cheesecakey Burritos
Joined: 06 Jul 2009
Posts: 6
Location: england
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:32 pm |
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| a bit boring 4/10 i know harsh |
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Pancake Smith
Joined: 05 Aug 2008
Posts: 3110
Location: America
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:39 pm |
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| Niall Calothycos wrote: |
| Don't worry about Sobchak's rant, Simon. He's just being rude and snarky. (per usual) |
I think you've really misunderstood him.
I didn't realize that Oscar had jumped until after the second time I read it. Broken glass would've helped.
I was expecting a nice little punchline right after Oscar jumped, but I was disappointed.
Small thing: In the beginning, "But this is the 6th of August!" doesn't really feel right. "But it's August!" is shorter and it just sounds better. |
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Sheena Totoro
Joined: 28 Apr 2007
Posts: 1114
Location: Slit-your-wrists land
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| Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:48 pm |
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| Sobchak Lebowski wrote: |
| Tsk Simon, Simon you must be getting bad at this where's the good old slapstick humor like just 4 or 5 frames of you peeing yourself or eating Frank-O's and then you also missed a clear punchline so we would know when to fake a laugh and feel smart for getting it like say Oscar accidentaly eating poo haha that'd have been funny hey but seriously now though I'm gonna gonna overquote this: "Quality over Quantity" everyone else is doing it don't ask me what it means but I feel better now that I said it holy crap now Niall is complimenting you I better say its a hard to get joke and give you a 10/10 |
Hahahah
Not bad, Si.
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Moviegirl House
Joined: 24 Dec 2008
Posts: 42
Location: IM SOMEWHERE! OKAY?!
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| Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:56 pm |
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| this was okay but i bet it would be waaay better than mine if i even tried to make a comic! |
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Lazlo House
Joined: 31 May 2008
Posts: 1016
Location: The apple orchard
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Simon Brancacane
Comic Team Member
Joined: 17 Jul 2007
Posts: 595
Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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| Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:04 am |
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| Pancake Smith wrote: |
| I didn't realize that Oscar had jumped until after the second time I read it. Broken glass would've helped. |
Yeah, it would probably have been better if I had edited the window, but last time I tried to do that it didn't end up very well.
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Fisheatfish House
Joined: 01 Aug 2009
Posts: 14
Location: On my laptop chillin!
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| Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:27 pm |
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i give it a 5/10 
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Susanna Harlan
Joined: 24 Mar 2008
Posts: 451
Location: Ponyville
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| Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 6:44 pm |
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it was good, but it was a little long,
7/10
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Josh Panzerotten
Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 94
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| Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:16 pm |
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| Moviegirl House wrote: |
| this was okay but i bet it would be waaay better than mine if i even tried to make a comic! |
No need to say that.
You couldn't make a joke if you had Warts and Tango helping you.
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Archimedes Panzerotten
Joined: 20 Feb 2009
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Location: California.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:19 pm |
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| Moviegirl House wrote: |
| this was okay but i bet it would be waaay better than mine if i even tried to make a comic! |
No need to say that.
You couldn't make a joke if you had Warts and Tango helping you. |
Ahaha
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