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VALIDUS - Issue 16 - A NEW DAWN? NO, BUT ENJOY IT REGARDLESS
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Bjorn Harlan
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:00 pm Reply with quote

I'm going to start making issue 2 shortly, any thoughts of anything I should change?

I'm thinking about condensing it to one page.

And slightly changing the name.

Edit - Oh and I asked Row to put this back in Collab but she is totally busy or something so if an alternatively sexy mod could do me the honour I'd be much obliged.

*curtsey*
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:32 pm Reply with quote

Definitely condense it into one page. Less workload. However, that means you need to pick out the best parts of the "pilot" issue.

Anyone else got thoughts on the best bits?
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:52 pm Reply with quote

Funny Lebowski wrote:
Definitely condense it into one page. Less workload. However, that means you need to pick out the best parts of the "pilot" issue.

Anyone else got thoughts on the best bits?
I rather liked the multi-page fiasco.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:30 pm Reply with quote

Any reasons why for any of these thoughts?
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 11:33 am Reply with quote

The layout is fantastic!
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:30 pm Reply with quote

Bjorn Harlan wrote:
Any reasons why for any of these thoughts?
Page 3 makes me think of The Sun.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:36 pm Reply with quote

Well I don't want to encourage voyeurism so I will condense.

Anyone else have anything to say?
You're all remarkably quiet.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:38 pm Reply with quote

no more elf romps either.
YOU KNOW I LIKE REINDEER NOW
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:55 pm Reply with quote

Hmm I've been trying to work with all the diagonal lines and stuff to give it a good flow but I can't get it to look good or readable, so I'm going to start over and make it a bit more square.

Also I'm going to slightly edit the name and I'm cutting it down to one page.

Thanks for your patience, once I've figured out exactly how this is going to look and built up templates etc issues should come more regularly.

EDIT - The zoom function needs to come back. It would make this so much better picture-wise.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 5:33 pm Reply with quote

Pepper Brancacane wrote:
Needs more Pepper.

Sorted Wink

NEW ISSUE OMG!

Yeah new title too how about that, tell me what you think and BE CONSTRUCTIVE!
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:47 pm Reply with quote

You should write for 'The Onion' Bjorn.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:30 pm Reply with quote

Errr taken down already??
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:33 pm Reply with quote

Sorry, back up.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:38 pm Reply with quote

Haha, it's amazing how much nonsense you can fit into one thing. I found it absolutely hilarious, though.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:04 pm Reply with quote

Rojoco Anderson wrote:
You should write for 'The Onion' Bjorn.

Heheh, thanks.

Any thoughts or stuff?

Oh and it was taken down because of well the blacked out word.
It's a good job I didn't release this a week earlier otherwise I would've got a ban for it Uhoh

And @Funny, amusing nonsense is what I aim for. It's like 'WTHIS?!' but on purpose.
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