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Simon Brancacane
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Joined: 17 Jul 2007
Posts: 595
Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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Trick Brancacane
Joined: 15 Nov 2008
Posts: 1667
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It is acctually good comic 
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Poison Simpson
Joined: 29 Jun 2008
Posts: 4973
Location: Joey Sturgis' House
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| Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:17 pm |
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Heh, it was alright, joke wasn't too strong, but good layout as always.
4.5/10.
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Pete Totoro
Translators Team
Joined: 02 Aug 2007
Posts: 857
Location: In the land of Köttbullar and Smörgåsbord.
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| Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:35 pm |
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| I like it. However, I don't like that the guy in the sofa had the same face for several frames, even though he was speaking. |
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Simon Brancacane
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Joined: 17 Jul 2007
Posts: 595
Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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| Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:49 pm |
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| Pete Totoro wrote: |
| I like it. However, I don't like that the guy in the sofa had the same face for several frames, even though he was speaking. |
The guy in the sofa was Trick. I've forgotten to credit the co-actors three times in a row 
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Knyh Risotto
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Joined: 05 Jan 2008
Posts: 2358
Location: BACKWARDS
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| Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:15 pm |
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Hehe.
Much better than some previous comics.
8/10.
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Oscar House
Joined: 24 Jul 2007
Posts: 920
Location: Third dimension
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| Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:37 pm |
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Funnnn
8/10
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Garfield Simpson
Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 160
Location: Ontario, Canada
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:14 am |
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I was expecting the floor, actually.
Good inference to the "waste"bins.
7.5/10 Punchline | Weight: 5
10/10 Editing | Weight: 3
10/10 Pleasing Layout | Weight: 2
37+30+20/50+30+20=87/100
Equals a Good Comic.
Perfect: 100
Excellent: 90~99
Good: 80~89
Average: 65~79
Needs Improvement: 50~64
Needs Major Overhaul: 49~
Pardon my YRDSB/Kumon marking, but I'm like
Obsessed. XD
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Archimedes Panzerotten
Joined: 20 Feb 2009
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Location: California.
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:49 am |
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Punchline could've been better..
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Darkdude Totoro
Joined: 05 Jul 2009
Posts: 547
Location: Norway
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:18 pm |
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Zane Lebowski
Joined: 01 Sep 2008
Posts: 182
Location: Candy LAND!
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 3:40 pm |
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9/10 its awsome
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Takeoshi Totoro
Warbears Mockup Master
Joined: 19 Jan 2008
Posts: 2172
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 4:36 pm |
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| Quite funny, I like it that you are making comics again now. |
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Sobchak Lebowski
Translators Team
Joined: 04 May 2007
Posts: 1393
Location: Confirmed. Sending supplies.
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 4:37 pm |
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Old layout was better, no shame in using Comic Sans.
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Crazyone Totoro
Joined: 10 Nov 2007
Posts: 850
Location: Warbears, UK :3
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 6:25 pm |
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Haha, made me laugh.
Hmm.. 8.7/10. |
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Simon Brancacane
Comic Team Member
Joined: 17 Jul 2007
Posts: 595
Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 8:06 pm |
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| Sobchak Lebowski wrote: |
| Old layout was better, no shame in using Comic Sans. |
Are you talking about the font only, or did you like the smaller frames better as well?
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