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No ending time set. |
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Susanna Harlan
Joined: 24 Mar 2008
Posts: 451
Location: Ponyville
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yeah....
anyway, it was ok, not your best though (6/10)
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Nickyh Smith
Joined: 12 Dec 2007
Posts: 933
Location: Taiwan
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| Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:07 pm |
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5/10 for average content
10/10 for living up to your title! |
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Garfield Simpson
Joined: 21 Feb 2007
Posts: 160
Location: Ontario, Canada
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:22 am |
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Punchline: 1/10 | Weight: 5
Editing: 7.5/10 | Weight: 3
Layout: 10/10 | Weight: 2
5+22.5+20/50+30+20=47.5/100
Needs Major Overhaul
Punchline: Tree gag: Overused
Ghost gag: Had no turn from the tree gag (Please, in the future, and to all future comicmakers, AVOID THE TREE GAG. IT ALWAYS LEADS TO FAILURE.)
Editing: Ghost would make more sense if person was sitting (since ghost always stands on the floor.)
I hope that this helped not just you, but (obviously) other comicmakers.
If not, here are the main points:
1. Read past comics. Find funny things that are
a) Not overused
b) Witty
2. If and/or when you do, then either find a way to
a) Revive the joke
b) Create a spinoff
3. If you are looking for a new joke,
a) Find inferences between common BTC items (e.g. what they do, where they go, etc.) and link it to a joke.
b) Always be as immaculate as possible, especially if (gulp) I happen to pass by.
WHICH I WILL, GUARANTEED. (Just joking.) But immaculacy counts in some, if not many, people's opinions.
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Lolbear Simpson
Joined: 18 May 2008
Posts: 2944
Location: UK, England
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| Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 4:00 pm |
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| Garfield Simpson wrote: |
| AVOID THE TREE GAG. |
If you read the comic more carefully, he's actually making fun of the tree gag. Simon himself says that's a old joke in the comic it self! |
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Timotini Mazinga
Joined: 29 Dec 2008
Posts: 2515
Location: Rock land
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| Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:51 pm |
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5/10 dude,It wasn't funny.
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Darkdude Totoro
Joined: 05 Jul 2009
Posts: 547
Location: Norway
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| Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:56 pm |
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Haha, you made me laugh.
10/10 |
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Timotini Mazinga
Joined: 29 Dec 2008
Posts: 2515
Location: Rock land
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| Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:04 am |
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| Darkdude Totoro wrote: |
Haha, you made me laugh.
10/10 |
Really?
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Darkdude Totoro
Joined: 05 Jul 2009
Posts: 547
Location: Norway
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| Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 7:01 pm |
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| Timotini Mazinga wrote: |
| Darkdude Totoro wrote: |
Haha, you made me laugh.
10/10 |
Really? |
Yes. |
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Ninja Panzerotten
Joined: 21 Jan 2008
Posts: 1382
Location: Badlands
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| Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:06 am |
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| Timotini Mazinga wrote: |
| Darkdude Totoro wrote: |
Haha, you made me laugh.
10/10 |
Really? |
People have different humour.  |
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Jesse Panzerotten
Joined: 16 Mar 2008
Posts: 624
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| Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:16 am |
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7/10
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Susie Totoro
Joined: 09 Aug 2007
Posts: 0
Location: Most likely my house, wishing people would stop bugging me about my name.
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| Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:09 pm |
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Eh...it was alright. 3/10.
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Lazlo House
Joined: 31 May 2008
Posts: 1016
Location: The apple orchard
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Clare Harlan
Joined: 16 Jan 2010
Posts: 9
Location: Anywhere with a beach.
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| Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 6:53 am |
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I didn't find it funny.  |
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Bleach Risotto
Joined: 19 Jun 2009
Posts: 631
Location: Bring all your friends because a group does it better.
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| Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:08 pm |
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| Clare Harlan wrote: |
| I didn't find it funny. |
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Cheesecakey Burritos
Joined: 06 Jul 2009
Posts: 6
Location: england
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| Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 11:09 am |
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| funny 4/10 |
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