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No ending time set.
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Simon Brancacane
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 1:32 pm Reply with quote

Important Notice: I'm on the right of the sofa, and Kinky is on the left. If you don't know that, you'll probably not get the joke.



Also, I've decided to stick to my "Alphabet" routine, but from now on I'll try to make the names a little more fitting. Smile
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Trick Brancacane



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:12 pm Reply with quote

Nice one Si!

9/10

First post Anxious
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Ben Lebowski
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:38 pm Reply with quote

First five panels must've been pretty easy to make. Razz
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Simon Brancacane
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:42 pm Reply with quote

Benjamin Lebowski wrote:
First five panels must've been pretty easy to make. Razz


Hehe, yes, they are made in Pivot with text added in Paint. Smile
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Trick Brancacane



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:53 pm Reply with quote

Simon Brancacane wrote:
Benjamin Lebowski wrote:
First five panels must've been pretty easy to make. Razz


Hehe, yes, they are made in Pivot with text added in Paint. Smile


Staring

I thougth that you make them only in paint
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Simon Brancacane
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:58 pm Reply with quote

Yes, but this time I decided to use Pivot. I also use Photoshop sometimes.
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Bjorn Harlan
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:01 pm Reply with quote

Well, two problems.

One, I couldn't tell who was who on the sofa, you both have the same hair, so i was a little confused.

Two, the editing around the edge of the TV was shabby and you could've at least imposed a picture on the TV.

Other than that, great.
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Simon Brancacane
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:07 pm Reply with quote

Thanks Bjorn.

I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left.
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Poison Simpson



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:24 pm Reply with quote

Simon Brancacane wrote:
Thanks Bjorn.

I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left.


Ohhhh, I thought it was the other way round.
Which kinda ruined the joke, for me.

You should've gotten a guy with different hair, or you could've edited the hair in.

Other than that, it was okay, 7.5/10.
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Kinky Simpson



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:40 pm Reply with quote

Poison Simpson wrote:
Simon Brancacane wrote:
Thanks Bjorn.

I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left.


Ohhhh, I thought it was the other way round.
Which kinda ruined the joke, for me.

You should've gotten a guy with different hair, or you could've edited the hair in.

Other than that, it was okay, 7.5/10.


May I ask how it ruined the joke Pois?

Nice comic Si, 9/10.
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Poison Simpson



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:44 pm Reply with quote

Kinky Simpson wrote:
Poison Simpson wrote:
Simon Brancacane wrote:
Thanks Bjorn.

I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left.


Ohhhh, I thought it was the other way round.
Which kinda ruined the joke, for me.

You should've gotten a guy with different hair, or you could've edited the hair in.

Other than that, it was okay, 7.5/10.


May I ask how it ruined the joke Pois?

Nice comic Si, 9/10.


Because I thought Simon was talking about how awesome adverts are, and then buying the stuff from the advert, making typical.

Whereas if I knew it wasn't him, then it would've been more funny, because he was complaining about them, and then he goes out to buy the product?

You understand? Grin grin
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Oscar House



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:48 pm Reply with quote

Too much fussssss... Stop.

9/10, quite enjoyable.
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Kinky Simpson



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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:48 pm Reply with quote

Ok Pois, I understand. Wink
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Pete Totoro
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PostPosted: Mon May 18, 2009 4:47 pm Reply with quote

Hm, not too good. 6/10
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PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2009 6:21 am Reply with quote

Niceeee Very Happy Nice one, dude! Grin grin 9/10... >.> hair prob Very Happy
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