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Rate it! No ending time set. |
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Simon Brancacane
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Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 595 Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 1:32 pm |
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Important Notice: I'm on the right of the sofa, and Kinky is on the left. If you don't know that, you'll probably not get the joke.
Also, I've decided to stick to my "Alphabet" routine, but from now on I'll try to make the names a little more fitting. _________________
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Trick Brancacane
Joined: 15 Nov 2008 Posts: 1667
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:12 pm |
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Nice one Si!
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Ben Lebowski
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Joined: 04 Apr 2007 Posts: 2073 Location: United States
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:38 pm |
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First five panels must've been pretty easy to make. _________________
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Simon Brancacane
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Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 595 Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:42 pm |
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Benjamin Lebowski wrote: |
First five panels must've been pretty easy to make. |
Hehe, yes, they are made in Pivot with text added in Paint. _________________
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Trick Brancacane
Joined: 15 Nov 2008 Posts: 1667
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:53 pm |
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Simon Brancacane wrote: |
Benjamin Lebowski wrote: |
First five panels must've been pretty easy to make. |
Hehe, yes, they are made in Pivot with text added in Paint. |
I thougth that you make them only in paint |
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Simon Brancacane
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Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 595 Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 2:58 pm |
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Yes, but this time I decided to use Pivot. I also use Photoshop sometimes. _________________
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Bjorn Harlan
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Joined: 20 Dec 2007 Posts: 2466
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:01 pm |
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Well, two problems.
One, I couldn't tell who was who on the sofa, you both have the same hair, so i was a little confused.
Two, the editing around the edge of the TV was shabby and you could've at least imposed a picture on the TV.
Other than that, great. |
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Simon Brancacane
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Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 595 Location: Karlstad, Sweden. Coolness rating: 10
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:07 pm |
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Thanks Bjorn.
I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left. _________________
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Poison Simpson
Joined: 29 Jun 2008 Posts: 4973 Location: Joey Sturgis' House
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:24 pm |
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Simon Brancacane wrote: |
Thanks Bjorn.
I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left. |
Ohhhh, I thought it was the other way round.
Which kinda ruined the joke, for me.
You should've gotten a guy with different hair, or you could've edited the hair in.
Other than that, it was okay, 7.5/10. _________________
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Kinky Simpson
Joined: 26 Jul 2007 Posts: 258 Location: Aperture Laboratories. Awesomeness: 800,001
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:40 pm |
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Poison Simpson wrote: |
Simon Brancacane wrote: |
Thanks Bjorn.
I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left. |
Ohhhh, I thought it was the other way round.
Which kinda ruined the joke, for me.
You should've gotten a guy with different hair, or you could've edited the hair in.
Other than that, it was okay, 7.5/10. |
May I ask how it ruined the joke Pois?
Nice comic Si, 9/10. _________________ Repeat Stuff |
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Poison Simpson
Joined: 29 Jun 2008 Posts: 4973 Location: Joey Sturgis' House
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:44 pm |
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Kinky Simpson wrote: |
Poison Simpson wrote: |
Simon Brancacane wrote: |
Thanks Bjorn.
I noticed the hair problem after making the comic, but I didn't bother changing it.
I'm on the right and Kinky is on the left. |
Ohhhh, I thought it was the other way round.
Which kinda ruined the joke, for me.
You should've gotten a guy with different hair, or you could've edited the hair in.
Other than that, it was okay, 7.5/10. |
May I ask how it ruined the joke Pois?
Nice comic Si, 9/10. |
Because I thought Simon was talking about how awesome adverts are, and then buying the stuff from the advert, making typical.
Whereas if I knew it wasn't him, then it would've been more funny, because he was complaining about them, and then he goes out to buy the product?
You understand? _________________
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Oscar House
Joined: 24 Jul 2007 Posts: 920 Location: Third dimension
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:48 pm |
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Too much fussssss... Stop.
9/10, quite enjoyable. _________________ Punch a duck |
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Kinky Simpson
Joined: 26 Jul 2007 Posts: 258 Location: Aperture Laboratories. Awesomeness: 800,001
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 3:48 pm |
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Ok Pois, I understand. _________________ Repeat Stuff |
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Pete Totoro
Translators Team
Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 857 Location: In the land of Köttbullar and Smörgåsbord.
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 4:47 pm |
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Hm, not too good. 6/10 |
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Wiewiur Smith
Joined: 21 Nov 2007 Posts: 4 Location: Location: Location: Location: lol Location: echo Points: 45+
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Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 6:21 am |
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Niceeee Nice one, dude! 9/10... >.> hair prob |
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