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Amazing Simpson



Joined: 23 Sep 2011
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 10:07 pm Reply with quote

This is my newsletter, BTC: The Undergrounds. I cant post links, so Msc will post a link to it below. This is my first newsletter and I hope it is successful! Thanks for reading it. Please tell me what you think! Wink

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Msc Anderson



Joined: 24 Dec 2008
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Location: Yorkshire, England

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 10:08 pm Reply with quote

Here's the link.
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Warts Smith
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Joined: 21 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 11:19 pm Reply with quote

Heh
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Traktor Totoro



Joined: 15 Dec 2010
Posts: 296

PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:14 am Reply with quote

Amazing Simpson wrote:
This is my newsletter, BTC: The Undergrounds. I cant post links, so Msc will post a link to it below. This is my first newsletter and I hope it is successful! Thanks for reading it. Please tell me what you think! Wink

I like it Smile
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Tango Totoro
Quizaboom
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Joined: 02 Jul 2008
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:28 am Reply with quote

That was a pretty good first issue, Amazing. I thought most of the sections were pretty funny! Consider trying to fit in a bit more content next time.
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Timotini Mazinga



Joined: 29 Dec 2008
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:46 am Reply with quote

Not bad, quite AMAZING Wink
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Warts Smith
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Joined: 21 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 11:48 am Reply with quote

Timotini Mazinga wrote:
Not bad, quite AMAZING Wink


Damn, beat me to it. Confused

Well yeah my history was part of it....but it's not what you're all thinking of...that's done on a different browser. Kawaii
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Coolboi Harlan



Joined: 28 Sep 2007
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Location: Somewhere in Bjorn's hair

PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:57 pm Reply with quote

I might start a newsletter...

Anyway, good first issue dude, nice colours, content, etcetera.
Keep em comin'

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Amazing Simpson



Joined: 23 Sep 2011
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2012 4:41 am Reply with quote

Thanks everyone! It means a lot! Wink I'm working on another issue. I'll try to get it done as soon as i can!

EDIT: Sorry I haven't been very "active" or anything. I've been with family, so I'll get to work on the next issue!Wink
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Msc Anderson



Joined: 24 Dec 2008
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:24 pm Reply with quote

Here's Issue #2
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Warts Smith
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:08 pm Reply with quote

Heheh nothing but a good ol threat to abut people up.
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Tango Totoro
Quizaboom
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Joined: 02 Jul 2008
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:17 am Reply with quote

Amazing, every section of this second issue made me smile! I loved the quizaboom reference in the interview section and the corner section was humorous. Please don't stop with the incredible newsletters!

Also, I would tell you what the difference is but you've already mentioned me in this newsletter, haha.
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Pete Totoro
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Joined: 02 Aug 2007
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Location: In the land of Köttbullar and Smörgåsbord.

PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:01 am Reply with quote

I do not like the design of it. The random array of bright colours are hurting my eyes, and the text does not always fit. Like in issue two, the first article was tough to read. I suggest redesign it to something more consistent and less colourful.

Text wise, I'm not sure what direction you're trying to go with this. Are you trying to deliver serious news, as it seemed like you attempted in the first issue, or are you trying to be humourus like in the second one? Honestly, trying to write news about such a small website and community is tough, and the "comedy" so far has been sub-par at best.

In my opinion it just seems like you're attempting to do what Bjorn did some time ago (What was it called?), but with less production value.
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Amazing Simpson



Joined: 23 Sep 2011
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 11:49 pm Reply with quote

Sorry for the wait everyone (My 2 or 3 fans). I'll start working on the next issue once I'm able to post links! Very Happy Thanks!

This is my 69th post! Wink
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Pancake Smith



Joined: 05 Aug 2008
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:16 am Reply with quote

There are more newsletters than there is news. Good luck.
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